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Is Your Website's Copy Up to the Mark?
By Donald Nelson (© Copyright, 2004)
The Internet is a relatively new medium. What works for
you in your printed offline brochures and advertising materials may or may
not work on your web page. If you have already invested either time or money
or both in your website you should carefully scrutinize the written words on
your pages to see if they can really deliver a return on your investment.
Here are five important questions to ask to when making a review of your
website's copy.
1. Can a web visitor quickly grasp
what your page is all about?
You
only have a short time to let your web visitors know the purpose of your
website. If it is not crystal clear, they will have already surfed on to
another website. Headlines and sub headings that convey your most important
pieces of information are a must, especially for the main page of your site.
Writing good headlines is a science in itself. Look at a newspaper, almost
every headline has a verb. Headlines must be active, and they must be
convincing. Marketeers and linguists alike have identified what they call
"power words", words that are emotive and draw attention like
"breakthrough", "new" , "discover." Use these words to grip the attention of
your web visitor.(An excellent introduction to the science of headline
writing is Shelley Lowery's article located at
http://www.web-source.net/secret_formulas.htm)
2. Is your "Unique Selling
Proposition" highlighted?
There may be hundreds of websites offering the same thing that you are
offering. What sets you apart? What is the distinguishing feature or benefit
of your product that makes your product or service different and, most
importantly, desirable? It may be one particular item, a combination of
items or it may be the sum total of all that you have to offer. If you were
a web hosting firm it might be "Worry Free Service at a Price You Can
Afford." This particular particular item is known as your Unique Selling
Proposition (USP). It is your biggest "cannon", and you have to "shoot it"
right at the top of your home page.
3. Have you clearly emphasized the
benefits that a consumer will get from your products or services?
It
is important for you to first distinguish the features and the benefits of
your product or service. Using the example of the web hosting firm, some
features might be user-friendly control panels, pre-installed cgi scripts,
back up power supply, etc. Benefits are not the same as features, benefits
deriving from these features would be: "Easy for you to maintain" and "you
don't have to worry about down-time."
Remember, it is the benefits that sells your product or service, not
necessarily the features. You must convincingly show that your product can
answer the needs and desires of the person who has just visited your web
page.
4. Is the copy optimized so that your
pages will do well in search engine queries?
Optimization for search engines is something that traditional advertising
copy writers never had to deal with. No matter how convincing your copy is,
if no one can find your page then it is useless. Be careful not to hide
your keywords with synonyms. If you want to be found for a particular word
or phrase, then make sure that this word or phrase is in your headlines, in
the body text and in clickable text ("anchor text") of links on your page.
For
example, if you have the sentence: Click Here to Learn more about our Web
Hosting Services. The clickable or active portion of the link should not be
the words "click here" but rather your keywords, "Web Hosting Services".
If your copy doesn't contain and emphasize your keywords, your page will not
fare well in Internet queries, even if your meta tags include these words
and phrases.
5. Is there a call to action?
What is your "most wanted response"? What do you want the surfer to do after
she or he has seen your pages? Maybe you would like her to order your
product, download an introductory ebook, to join your mailing list, to fill
out a form, or to call you up for an appointment? You can't expect her to do
this, unless you ask her to do it and show her how to do it. You may need a
nice button that says "Order Now", or a sub headline that says "Download
your Free ebook." The "call to action" is very important and that's why you
should make it prominent, and repeat it more than once.
So,
take a look at your website, and make sure that your copy is really doing
the job of capturing the attention of your web visitors, convincing them
about the merits of your offering, and showing them how to take the next
step.
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Donald Nelson is an editor, web developer and social
worker. He has been working on the Internet since 1995 and is currently the
director of A1-Optimization (http://www.a1-optimization.com)
a firm providing affordable search engine optimization and web promotion
services. You can sign up for his monthly newsletter "Web Promotion Tips" by
sending an email with "subscribe" in the subject heading to
subscribe@a1-optimization.com
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